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Thursday, January 31, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 21

I believe that they should not allow Performance-Enhancing Drugs(PED). I know at one PERIOD of time they didn't care what people took but now we saw that was bad and banned it. It is a TRADITION to not use PEDs and see what your body can do without PEDs. I know it is the PRIMARY thing do if someone wants to improve their performance but it is considered cheating. They side effects are bad also like major anger problems that can get you in trouble and people can notice it and see you are PEDs. So don't take them it is considered cheating and has bad side effects.


2 comments:

Ms. Priester said...

Waldo, I wish your blog had some exact facts from other sources. For example, when did PEDs become banned? Good job using the vocabulary words in your paragraph. Also, remember that we are now using two chunks in each of the vocab paragraphs.

Erika said...

You did really well writing this paragraph. It seems like it came easily for you. Good job!