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Thursday, February 14, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23 - Dog Fighting

Dog fighting shouldn't be allowed because it is wrong to abuse a life form. Those dogs have the POTENTIAL to live a healthy long lives but dog fighting have made them aggressive and have lost the change to live a healthy life. To some people dog fighting is their FORMULA to have fun and make money but it is wrong. You can tell the DISTINCTIVE features in a fighting god and a normal dog , the fighting dog has a lot of scars while the other dog doesn't.  I hate it when innocence life forms gets abused because I use to get abused.

1 comment:

Ms. Priester said...

Waldo, you did a good job of making a sincere connection with this topic that evokes an emotional response within the reader. I want you to work on adding specific factual concrete details to strengthen your arguments. I appreciate that you have compassion for animals.